Zira Mahaku(not finish and edit it later)

[ziramahaku]

Name-Zira Mahaku

Age-17

Height-157

Weight-165

Body Type-

Appearance-Red hair with head band, Black cloak up to waist, Black gloves ,Black boots, scar running down cheek,

Village-doesn't know

Allegiance-The unknown strangers(see history)

Family-Don't know think dead

Weapons-
-Spike blade
-spikes
-shuikan
-spikes

Jutsu-
Taijutsu

Ninjutsu

Genjutsu

Forbidden/specialty

History-Zira's mother had abanded him in the wild for what could get him frist but some strangers found him they took him in as their own, they trained him to fight, control his chakra, to use ninjutsu,taijutsu,genjutsu,and forbidden jutsu, but then they went to far in the training and accidentally disturbed a demon that was sealed inside Zira he killed them all and left the temple now today he Rome's the hidden fire village.

[Atake, the Mist Shadow]

Okay, couple points I have to make: 1. Legibility is an issue here. Your posts have to be clear and precise, or our rather stupid members *cough*Kumori*cough* can't read what you've written. You spell things correctly, but God DANG at the run-ons. I mean it can't be fun reading a sentence like theres where there's no end and no punctuation cause that makes it hard to read and it makes it seem like its all so fast and oh my god this is really annoying to do but i have to to get my point across and i like lizards and OH MY GOD, Do you understand?

I understand it's not finished, just please let us be able to understand your work.

[ziramahaku]

Name-Zira Mahaku

Age-17

Height-157

Weight-165

Body Type-

Appearance-Red hair with head band, Black cloak up to waist, Black gloves ,Black boots, scar running down cheek,

Village-

Allegiance-

Family-Don't know think dead

Weapons-

Jutsu-
Taijutsu

Ninjutsu

Genjutsu

Forbidden/specialty

History-

[Kumori The Fallen Leaf]

Umm im not trying to be mean but you dont haft to repost just go up to modify and redo it it makes it look a lot nicer and its easier to understand

[Akuma Harren: the Black]

btw, akuma, you might want to use Microsoft word/Firefox to spell check. lol.

Same for zira.